“DRAMATIC CRITIQUE” by Ty Granderson Jones

I READ THE PLAY,
BUT THIS YOU SHOULD,
IF YOU COULD:

I WOULD LIKE TO SEE THE FATHER
NOT BOTHER.

MORE COLOR
TO THE MOTHER
WITH HER SPASM
BEFORE THE ORGASM.

AND THE SON SHOULD TAKE A PISS
BEFORE ACT II.

Ty Granderson Jones

Photo by Jonas Mohr of the acclaimed book “MUGSHOTS”

All Rights Reserved

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One comment

  1. lkthayer · January 9, 2010

    Love this! Thanks Ty for letting me squeeze you! LK 🙂

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