It started like a new beginning was unfolding.I was told I was a great friend, why don’t we take it to the next level?When I responded of my inadequacy, you left me like the wind.The table was set, but for others.Being left out of all the love in your house at Thanksgiving was going to be hard to take.It appeared to your friends that you were enamored with a young marine.You denied it.Funny, he got the invite, I got left in the cold.Time to move on.Happy T.
BOB ABRAMSON
© 2010
Any friend of Alexis & Fancher is a friend to me, thanks for your great poem and welcome to The Juice Bar! 🙂
You are lovely … LOVE the support you give to all your artists!!!!
It’s my pleasure! 🙂
Terrific poem. Raw, simple, and straight to the heart. Bravo, Bob!
Alexis thank you for getting me on the poet web site.
People are already commenting.
love, your bud Bob
Bob … very touching … thank you for sharing … I hope to read more of your work soon!!!! So glad you’re gettin’ squeezed … A VERY happy Thanksgiving to you and THANKS for your poem!
Hi Bob,
I really liked this poem. The line, “You left me like the wind” evokes a great image. Thanks so much for sharing your work with us.
Hope to see more of it here.
Roz
thanks Roz
This was my first poem. I think it worked because it ws from my heart (broken).
Great poem, from the heart Bob! Hap Trowbridge, catch me on tagged.com
much thanks Hap
having trouble signing up on tagged. keeps asking me to fill in country which
I can not find.
New poet in the house. I felt the ouch in there Bob. Liked it, a fish hook in the skull. Pull it out and keep angling. Look forward to your next catch.
Marcus
thanks Marcus, I like your reply , this is my first poem.
Marcus, You are a great poet. I keep reading your comment to my poem. Its great. Thanks Bob
your poem resonated with me. simple but very deep. congratulations and kudos!