Laurie Quinn Seiden and her Burmese cat, Bart


You’re hanging your paintings
Around the room
Long slender arms
The curve of your hip
Morning sunlight coming through
You ask me “does this look straight?”
But all I can concentrate on is you

Paint spattered jeans
Four sizes too big
Hanging off your hips
Halter top showing flat belly
I pretend to be paying attention
But my thoughts drift off

How easily I could slide down your jeans
Wouldn’t have to unbutton a thing
The softness of your thighs
The musk smell between your legs
I drift away to familiar places

Sure baby “that looks straight”
Like I’m really paying attention
© 2010
In loving memory…rest in peace Gary


  1. lkthayer · October 3, 2010

    This is a wonderful poem, I love the inner thoughts expressed, very sensuous!

  2. Alexis Rhone Fancher · October 3, 2010

    Now that’s hot! Really hot…I love you. I love your work.

  3. Roz Levine · October 3, 2010

    Hi Gary,
    Lucky wife to be wed to a wordsmith with such a smooth talking, erotic writing lover man. Great words and images. Glad to see your work on this site. Send in more, more, more so we can slip and slide the sensual life along with you.

  4. Leah Sullivan · October 3, 2010

    Makes me smile to read your honest maleness, poet. You drew me in close, right there with you.

  5. Marcus · October 3, 2010

    Straight shot Gary! Right to the art of the matter.



  6. arjdalumat · October 4, 2010

    This is very sexy. And naughty! 🙂

  7. Linda Bishop · October 4, 2010

    Every woman on the planet wants to have the guy she loves think this way about her! Great poem.

  8. Victoria · October 5, 2010

    beautiful, soft, tender, so loving…..and very hot, very sexy!

    • karen seiden · February 13, 2012

      Not really

    • karen seiden · February 13, 2012


    • Lynn Gibson · February 18, 2012

      I really see it as a little narcissistic with an edge of betrayal and really quite a turn off. But that’s just what I see in the poem!

  9. H. Green · March 26, 2011

    Wow – Thank you for sharing your inner-world, Gary – Simply written, beautifully expressed. The world will miss your honest self-expression.
    A safe and wonderful journey, Gary. Be free.

    • karen seiden · February 13, 2012

      Love Betrayed
      a memoir
      Karen Seiden

      • Lynn Gibson · February 18, 2012

        Great book and a MUST READ!!! Thanks Karen for taking me on a journey as I read your book into the world of “Dan”. I was betrayed by him while he was married to this Lourie person and just like you, I feel the betrayal as well! Not so beautiful and not so honest is “Dan” is he?

  10. karen seiden · February 13, 2012

    Love betrayed
    a memoir
    Karen Hinton

    Read what it’s really like to be married to Gary Seiden

    • Lynn Gibson · February 15, 2012

      Read the book and it was GRRREEEAATT!!!! Loved it!

  11. karen seiden · February 13, 2012

    Not so great at the end

    • Lynn Gibson · February 15, 2012

      You are definitely right!

  12. karen seiden · February 13, 2012

    Love Betrayed
    a memoir

    If you only knew…
    It was really good until th very end
    Read all about Gary

    • Lynn Gibson · February 15, 2012

      Ive read your book and it was GREAT!!! Gary seems like he must have had “split personalities” because “Dan” Gary really is a not a very nice human being in the book. LOVED LOVED LOVED the book! Didnt Gary believe in Karma?

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