Laurie Quinn Seiden and her Burmese cat, Bart
You’re hanging your paintings
Around the room
Long slender arms
The curve of your hip
Morning sunlight coming through
You ask me “does this look straight?”
But all I can concentrate on is you
Paint spattered jeans
Four sizes too big
Hanging off your hips
Halter top showing flat belly
I pretend to be paying attention
But my thoughts drift off
How easily I could slide down your jeans
Wouldn’t have to unbutton a thing
The softness of your thighs
The musk smell between your legs
I drift away to familiar places
Sure baby “that looks straight”
Like I’m really paying attention
© 2010
In loving memory…rest in peace Gary
This is a wonderful poem, I love the inner thoughts expressed, very sensuous!
Now that’s hot! Really hot…I love you. I love your work.
Hi Gary,
Lucky wife to be wed to a wordsmith with such a smooth talking, erotic writing lover man. Great words and images. Glad to see your work on this site. Send in more, more, more so we can slip and slide the sensual life along with you.
Makes me smile to read your honest maleness, poet. You drew me in close, right there with you.
Straight shot Gary! Right to the art of the matter.
Thanks,
Marcus
This is very sexy. And naughty! 🙂
Every woman on the planet wants to have the guy she loves think this way about her! Great poem.
beautiful, soft, tender, so loving…..and very hot, very sexy!
Not really
NOT!
I really see it as a little narcissistic with an edge of betrayal and really quite a turn off. But that’s just what I see in the poem!
Wow – Thank you for sharing your inner-world, Gary – Simply written, beautifully expressed. The world will miss your honest self-expression.
A safe and wonderful journey, Gary. Be free.
Love Betrayed
a memoir
by
Karen Seiden
Karenhintonwriter.com
Great book and a MUST READ!!! Thanks Karen for taking me on a journey as I read your book into the world of “Dan”. I was betrayed by him while he was married to this Lourie person and just like you, I feel the betrayal as well! Not so beautiful and not so honest is “Dan” is he?
Love betrayed
a memoir
BY
Karen Hinton
Karenhintonwriter.com
Read what it’s really like to be married to Gary Seiden
a.k.a.
dan
Read the book and it was GRRREEEAATT!!!! Loved it!
Not so great at the end
You are definitely right!
Love Betrayed
a memoir
Karenhintonwriter.com
If you only knew…
It was really good until th very end
Read all about Gary
a.k.a.
Dan
Ive read your book and it was GREAT!!! Gary seems like he must have had “split personalities” because “Dan” Gary really is a not a very nice human being in the book. LOVED LOVED LOVED the book! Didnt Gary believe in Karma?